Andrey (azangru) wrote,
Andrey
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Еще о целомудрии советских переводов

Было (Воннегут):

Billy took his pecker out, there in the prison night, and peed and peed on the ground.

Стало:

Билли снова расстегнул штаны и в темноте лагерной ночи стал без конца орошать землю.

Или:

"Have a good nap, did you?" said the porter.
"Yes," said Billy.
"Man," said the porter, "you sure had a hard-on."


- Что, выспался?- спросил проводник.
- Да,- сказал Билли.
- Ну, братец,- сказал проводник,- видно было, что тебе снилось...

(это, по-моему, совершенно не прочитывается)

Зато вот тут неплохо:

The women in the play were really men, of course. The clock had just struck midnight, and Cinderella was lamenting:

Goodness me, the clock has struck -
Alackday, and fuck mu luck.



Женские роли, разумеется, играли мужчины. Часы только что пробили полночь, и Золушка в отчаянии пела басом:

Бьют часы, ядрена мать,
Надо с бала мне бежать!
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